Aux Power System Wiring

Ok... so I had quite a bit of down time at work today, so I decided I would play around with powerpoint to make a wiring diagram for a auxiliary power system I want to add to the X to run all the lights, compressor, and other powered accessories that I plan to ad... and I figure since its a plan for a wire diagram it could be considered an interior mod...



So that is the product of 3 hours of boredom....
Please let me know what you think...
Will it work?
Any improvements need to be made?

I figure I'll actually run as much as I can in a single loom and try to use different color wires for different things. I want this to be super clean and professional...